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from the days of my idealistic youth

Friday, November 14th, 2008

The fumes get to me so I decide to move outside. I walk around towards the back of the house, trying to clear the stench of burning plastic from my nostrils. I can still watch the fire though a row of picture windows that runs along the rear of the house. I still smell it and I worry briefly about brain cells popping. Whatever, I’ll grow new ones.

I just spayed most of the house with gasoline and set the living room on fire. I’d wanted to watch from the inside as long as I could, but it turns out I can’t stomach the smell of suburban affluence melting. Even in death, this cursed house is repulsive.

It’s fun to watch though, the furniture looks like it’s transmogrifying into abstract art and the carpet is peeling away like skin on a third degree burn victim. I can still see most of this from outside, but smoke gets in the way. I keep backing up as heat builds and builds. I’m wondering if the windows will shatter or liquefy or something. It’s frustrating. I want to see as much of the destruction as possible but I don’t want to become part of the damage.

I think I can hear someone screaming inside. I wonder about my parents. Will they asphyxiate or will they burn to death? I hope they burn. I look at them as two household appliances set to fry. My mom’s a broken microwave, my dad’s a flat screen TV. They weren’t horrible; I might have more sympathy for them if they were really bad. It’s just time to throw them out.

It’s time to throw everything in a pile and burn it. Like right before we moved to this pit, when we cleaned out the basement of the old house, dragged all the junk into the backyard. My dad burned the first big pile without me; he said the flames reached over 25 feet tall. I was sorry to have missed it at the time, but this fire more than makes up for it.

I watch the flames for a few more seconds and then turn around, walk though the backyard, step into the woods behind my burning house. It’s kind of dark out but I make my way through without much hassle. I can still move through wilderness without getting scratched up, despite not having much practice lately. I push my way through some bushes out into the street and continue walking down the side of the road until I see my friend’s car, right about where I told him to meet me. I get in and we start the long drive out west.

I didn’t tell him anything about what I just did, but as we leave the subdivision he says, “I wonder what that smoke’s about, do you think a house caught fire or something?”

“Maybe,” I reply, “maybe.”

am i in trouble?

Wednesday, November 12th, 2008

I woke up at five or maybe four. O’clock, yeah, or maybe six. I don’t know. I jumped onto my brother’s bed and yelled for him to wake up, that Santa was here. He wasn’t really here; I just wanted him to get up fast. He woke up real fast and ran downstairs and almost fell. It was funny. And, um, we yelled, MOMMY DADDY WAKE UP when we were running down the stairs, but then we smelled the coffee on and we stopped yelling. We ran and ran forever and ever until we got to the tree and Mommy made us brush our hair before we opened gifts so she could send pictures to Auntie Erma. So we brushed our hair and then tore into our gifts and Daddy said Open your stockings first but we said NO we already brushed our hair and I got a jewelry box and lip gloss and nail polish and that’s when I got mad, when everything was opened

All I asked Santa for Christmas was a My Kelly doll. I told EVERYONE– Santa at the mall and Santa at my school assembly and everyone from Daisies and Gramma and Grandpa and Carol- she’s the troop leader. And I ESPECIALLY told Mommy and Daddy. I told them every day, and Mommy heard me pray to God and baby Jesus for a My Kelly doll every night. I felt like there were worms and dogs and frogs and everything in my stomach when I didn’t get her

We had to go back to school I think a week later, but we had a Daisy Scout meeting the day after Christmas. Jenni was in Florida to visit her Gramma and Ashley P. was in Pennsylvania, so there was just some of us there, and then me and Carol, and Mrs. Rolland was the Helper Mom. I packed up my bag with potato chips because Carol called my mom and said Bring chips and so we did and everyone was already there except Lissi because her dog had died but we didn’t know that yet. So we waited for Lissi for a while and talked about what we got for Christmas, except Rachel ’cause she’s Jewish. And EVERYONE got a My Kelly doll except me. Then the phone rang and Carol got a serious look and put up the quiet sign and said Lissi called Scooter died and we were all sad but then Mrs. Rolland brought cookies

Then later, after ice cream cake, Rachel said she was real mad that her Uncle Philip didn’t get her another bird like he said he would. And someone else, I think Melissa, said she hated her brother forever and ever for getting her a My Kelly brush and outfit that he knew she already had. And then everyone started saying I wanted this I didn’t get this I hate my brother and then I said We should get our parents back for being so mean. Carol was cleaning up our cups and plates and she came over to me and bent down a little and said You don’t really mean that and I said Yes I do I wish they were DEAD! and everyone got big eyes and Carol took my hands like Gramma does when she gives me money only she calls money a Little Something and says Here’s a Little Something but um Carol took my hands and said You don’t really want them to die and I said yes I do yes I do and everyone was quiet for a long time and then PJ said I wish my mom were dead sometimes and then everyone started saying they wished their parents were dead. Carol asked us grownup questions like Where would you live? How would you get to school? Do you know that death is forever? but we were too busy talking about how cool it would be to have no parents

We thought about getting to eat ice cream for every meal. We thought about riding bikes down the stairs and never having to use indoor voices and turning their bedroom into a swimming pool. And Carol said No! no! but then the meeting started so we had to be quiet. After the Girl Scout pledge but before our parents came, we decided to meet at recess the first day we were back to talk about it. We swore on our My Kelly dolls that we wouldn’t tell anyone, and then I got madder because I didn’t have a My Kelly doll and I started crying and then my mom came to pick me up and made me raviolis and I was happy

I almost forgot all about it but I saw a My Kelly commercial and got mad again, and then PJ called and asked where to meet for recess because we all had different teachers and I said By the Dead Man because there’s a little hill by the kickball place and everyone says someone’s buried there. So we called everyone and said Recess by the Dead Man and they said OK

So everyone came back from vacation all happy and wearing new clothes and Ashley P. said she went SNOWBOARDING and we said oooh and Jenni said she went WINDSURFING and we said oooh and I said I went to the bathroom and everyone laughed but my teacher said Stay after lunch That was disrespectful and I said NOOOOO because I had to meet the Daisy scouts by the Dead Man but she said That’s it Missy Silent Lunch so I had to eat in the class and not in the Cafetorium. Cara is in my class so she told everyone we’d meet tomorrow and I had to say I’m sorry to my teacher for being disrespectful but I thought it was funny

Then the next day I got to go to lunch and everyone said We missed you and I was happy that they did. So we met by the Dead Man and I sat on the tippy top of the hill and made everyone count off like we do in Girl Scouts. My number is 4 so we count off One Two Three to make sure everyone is there. We were all there. Then Rachel said This is a stupid club and I said Do your parents let you watch the grownup shows on late at night? and she said no. I said Do you want to? Could you if you had no parents? and she got happy and said I bet I could and I’d watch every show and laugh at all the jokes that Mommy says I don’t understand. Then I asked everyone why they didn’t like their parents. Melissa lives with just her Mommy and she said she didn’t like her Mommy’s weird boyfriends. We all said What if you had no mom? and she said I’d have no weird people eating macaroni in my TV room. Then for a little while we talked about what we knew about murder. We said maybe it wouldn’t hurt them so much if we held their nose for a long time? Cara said it only takes ten seconds to do that, she saw it on a TV show once. Then she practiced on me. She held my nose and mouth and counted to nine and I bit her because I didn’t want to die and her hands tasted like a rubber ball and she screamed real loud and Mrs. D took me to the principal and took Cara to the nurse. I was so mad and still dizzy. I decided to try nose-holding on my mom

It was the next day or maybe the day after. My mom still wouldn’t let me watch TV or play video games or go on a play date because Cara’s mom called and yelled at my mom for a long time. Mommy was in her chair and I climbed on her lap and said Can we play a game and she smiled and said Ok. I said First sit on your hands and she did. Next I said Close your eyes and she did. Then I pinched her nose. It was a lot bigger and greasier than I thought it would feel. Then she opened her eyes and took my fingers off her nose and said Stop, that hurts. So I had to think of another way

When I got off punishment for biting Cara’s hand, Jenni asked me Is your Mommy ‘fraid of dying? I said I don’t know, she never talks about it. I said Oh except when she’s in a restaurant cause she’s ‘llergic and then I had the idea. My mom is ‘llergic to peanuts! Her throat gets all swelled and she goes COUGH! COUGH! and then her face turns red! So that was Tuesday and today Daddy went food shopping and I asked Could I come? and he said Sure, pumpkin-pie and we went. I asked where the peanuts were and he laughed and said You don’t even like peanuts and you know Mommy gets scared if they’re in the house and I said I do too like them and I threw them in the cart. I called PJ and told her and she started crying and said Don’t Don’t and I heard a click on the phone and I hung up and ran into my brother’s room and he had the phone in his hands and he was all wide-eyed and said You hate Mom and Dad too? and I said Mommy and Daddy are stupid and he said I’m the only third grader in the whole school who can’t ride bikes without a helmet and I look stupid. He said he’d help me. He said Don’t put in whole peanuts, she’ll taste them, so we took the whole jar and poured it onto the floor, and smashed them to a million trillion little pieces with a wooden hammer. Then we put the pieces in all the food in the house- tomato gravy and mayonnaise and cereal and we mixed it in real good so she couldn’t tell and then Mommy just stopped breathing. They took her here and gave her shots and Daddy was crying and my brother was scared kind of because Mommy looked like a balloon and Daddy said Stop using sailor language and Daddy cried some more and Mommy was hooked to wires and it wasn’t fun anymore and I said Sorry to God about what I did and Daddy heard and he told the doctors, I think, and now here I am. Am I in trouble?

written in 2001

Butterflies

Thursday, November 6th, 2008

by Sid Prise

Daphne Mae was going to die today.  She sensed it.  Nine years of life was a long stretch in a West Virginia hollow, amongst a thousand shades of green, a warm embrace of buzzing invisible insects, birds and bullfrogs.  She sat on the porch of her family’s house, a ramshackle fortress of wood, brown gone green with the delicious rot, and watched the pond, a cool respite from the heat, a bath of frogs and leeches.  She picked at a tick that had lodged in the small of her olive back, and tried to think of butterflies.

They were her passion, delicate gossamer wings, painted like signs on God’s highway.  She knew them all, the various shades and splotches, which she endeavored to capture in paints upon sallow, manila sheets of construction paper.  She had saved three weeks to buy the pad, and she guarded it with her life.  She made her own paints with the various juices of berries and bark.  She painted, forgetting her hunger.

It was a long time sitting on the buckled planks of her porch, sketching with a broken toothbrush, a dizziness overtaking her that seemed to make the wings flutter there on the page.  Mommy and Big Sis were gone, working long hours; Daddy gone year now, before Daphne Mae knew him.  No one to watch over her, so she skipped school, and concentrated on her painting.

Daphne Mae was bored in school, bored with every subject but Art, a place where she shined.  In that class, she got Bs and As; she failed nearly everything else.  It was so boring, sitting there in a hard plastic seat, at a hard plastic desk.  She kept daydreaming, a dizzy space her head wandered into almost beyond her control.   Her teachers thought her stupid, or worse, lazy.  Her fellow students thought her the same.  She was shy, and was often picked on.  Mean girls and mean boys trailed her constantly, calling her trash, and worse.  So, Daphne Mae stopped going.

“They won’t miss me,” she breathed in the warmth of the afternoon, picking her tick and sketching blood red and golden yellow, shaping the splotches into wings.

The wings looked like eyes.  They looked into hers with a secretive, pensive gaze.  Something was expected, something to be revealed.  Daphne Mae often looked into her own eyes in the pond, at her face and her six-year-old’s body.  She was small, easily picked on.  But her dark hair framed a very wise face, skin bronze like the Cherokee in her ancestry, eyes of opal black that stared the objects of her gazes clear through.  She would be an artist someday.

But, the hunger.  She had not eaten all day, and the day before had only a slice of government cheese.  They had feasted on it for weeks, and maybe it had gone bad.  It did not sit well in her stomach.  But she knew this dance of hunger.  It began in the stomach, but soon left there.  What became of it was dizziness, a strange feeling of flight, as if her head and heart would soon fly out of her body.  Something expectant in those eyes, she thought.  She would die today.

Butterflies, butterflies.  They were free, spirits floating like angels, drinking their nourishment from the flowers.  Daphne Mae had tried her tongue at those flowers, moved by hunger and by the inexplicable need to taste what her muses tasted, her inspirations.  But she did not like the taste of flowers.  So, she shivered there, in the warmth of afternoon, wondering at a life in the clouds.

It couldn’t go on.  Every day, fifty like her slid into a final dizziness, a final darkness, the shadows of which began to gather into her periphery.  Fifty children in America.  Daphne Mae accepted it, knowing it would come.  What could be done, after all?

Hunger was a specter that had haunted her all her life.  Her six-year-old’s body, her skinny legs and arms, her wise face framed in black, her dizzy, otherworldly temperament, her butterflies.  It all made sense.

But what was life to a nine-year-old child?  Surely, there were other worlds than this.  Some roll of the dice that could lead Daphne Mae to some other life, a life of proper paints and easels, the taste of meat and milk, a television and a Daddy.  Reincarnation? It seemed to Daphne Mae too easy an answer, too convenient.  The righting of wrongs.  What if things were just wrong?

One life to live.  But, painting, Daphne Mae didn’t worry about injustice, or politics, or where her Mommy and Big Sis were, or when they would get home.  She didn’t worry about all the mean kids at school, nor her mean teachers.  She didn’t care about the taste of flowers.
She worried only about a color here, a line there.

An artist.  Daphne Mae wondered at her talent, her head and heart, and wondered if she might, in another life, have ever gone to college, to art school, to hone her craft like a stick of whittled wood becoming a chair leg, or a flute.  God had given her a gift.  Why would God have given her a gift, just to let it die with her now?

But perhaps art wasn’t about becoming famous, nor learing more about it.  Perhaps art was right here, right now.  Those eyes.  They peered into her own with bravery and a clarity that made Daphne Mae shiver in revelation.  This moment, this realization, was the key.

Acceptance.  It was Daphne Mae’s lot.  To slowly starve, to throw down her hands when the mean girls pummeled her, to make her own paints with berries and bark, to wait here in this hollow, knowing she would never see her Mommy or her Big Sis again.  The darkness was moving upon her, seeping in from the periphery, making tunnel vision in which her butterflies’ eyes became everything.

“I love,” she said to the hollow, to her family shack, to the pond with its frogs and leeches, to the tick buried in the small of her back, to her God that willed or allowed, to the butterflies, wondering what she meant.  Could she love all?

A butterfly fluttered down from the trees, settling on the buckled boards of the porch.  It had the markings of eyes on its wings, and Daphne Mae smiled.  Then another came down, then another.  Then another, then another.  A swarm of butterflies descended, one by one, and Daphne Mae dropped her toothbrush and her artwork, and lifted her arms like Jesus, straight out from her body.  They settled there, on her arms, and lifted her clear from the hollow, beyond the trees, beyond the clouds.

They found her there, careworn Mommy and old-before-her-time Big Sis.  There she was, beside her drawings, her stomach shrunk down to nothing, in bib overalls she’d worn since she was six.  A phone was a luxury denied them, so they drove in their ancient jeep to the mall and pumped a quarter and a dime into the payphone, and called the coroner.

Shame.  It poisoned their grief.  Surely, they could have done more.  Big Sis could have saved that slice of cheese, Mommy could have taken those extra hours.  But they were hungry, too.  Big Sis felt the dizziness, Mommy incapable of putting in a seventieth hour.  But Daphne Mae was dead.  All fell into ridiculous self-parody in the darkness of that fact.

There would be allegations.  Neglect.  Unfitness.  The bureaucrats who were conveniently absent during the starvation would rise up to be there to accuse.  Hell would visit the house of Daphne Mae.  Newsworthy would be her ascent into the clouds.  Newsworthy for a day or two.  Then, forgotten.

Another day in America.